PRODUCTION- Editing Blog 3

After reviewing back the first draft. I realised that our narrative was not clear at all, and i did not have any idea on how to make it clear with this narrative. Therefore I thought about it and spoke to my teacher and I came to a conclusion that we should change the narrative but we could use some of the shots that we have already shot.

When looking through the first draft I realised that their is not a variation of camera shot and movement and therefore i do not think that it looks very effective; as well as that some of the videos cut of peoples heads or were not table and fluid. Therefore I  made a document in which contains a new script, schedule and brief shot list. I thought this would be helpful and make sure that we get the shots we need.